Good work keep it up 5/5

Good poem.. sad tho. i kno how u feel i can relaly relate.. i hate who i am too. i relaly like how it flowed and everything. u have talent. so keep on writing. great job 5/5
take care
luve angie

Such a great poem.. i loved every part of it.. i guess the only thing i would change is the spelling of scared... lol. but yes this poem was sooo completely astonishing.. i just could not belive how well writtien it was... awesoem job.. lol defiantely a 5/5