Lost

by mcrmysbobertthe spanis pengien   Aug 2, 2006


Call for help
after all your put downs
you give no hope
you give no dreams
lost in sea of sadness
and pain
after the tears you pour
all is lost
and there is no more

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  • 18 years ago

    by Love Panda

    Maybe you could expand your metaphor a bit more, that would be kool..total depths..

    october xx

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥*Jodie*♥

    Really good best poem iv read in a very logn time! uv got such good and unique ways of expressing things

  • 18 years ago

    by Candice

    Good job on this poem nice flow and such strong emotions. Keep it up! :) 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Wow...i can really relate to this...excellent job putting your emotions down in such a short poem...5/5.

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