Perfect people with their perfect minds.

by FlowerThatDied   Aug 2, 2006


Shattered nights full of shattered life,
With my perfect person who got me through the strife,
With perfect friends and a perfect love,
A perfect person sent from above,

In my shattered dream that I see in the night,
When I get scared the perfect people come to light,
And fight and save til I awake,
To find a miserable world where it's all fake,

Colourless rain like colourless people,
Feeling nothing, being feeble,
No one's protective, no one cares,
For the miserable people in a world that scares,

Lights flickering in my mind,
Everything is fake and strange I find,
In my perfect world I can hide away,
And so forever asleep I'll stay,

Shining knife like my shining thoughts,
Of death and a world I can abort,
To the perfect people I see through my eyes,
Together forever with love, you and I.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Wow.. such an emotional and well written poem, i can feel every words that have been wrote! it flowed well and good use of rhythm..keep it up 5/5..please read and comment on my poems, thank you .. kirsty palmer xx

  • I really love the words used and the rhythm is awesome, i can see where your coming from and can relate easilly...really very good!