Comments : Rainbow Feelings

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Ohhhh funky!

    hey girlieeeeeeeeee!

    Long time no commenting! Lol No I'm gonna go nit picky on you and say that there is more you can do here, if you expand a bit on each emotion if you're feeling up to it. other wise, I like this very much, it's different and fresh. It was a nice change from the other poems Ive read lately:

    Slit mywrists and watch the crimsion rain die O_O

    man those people aka me, are soooo happy eh!? lol well I'm off to read another poem.

    see you!