"dog shaped hair." i don't know why i love that so much, but i do. it's original.

oh, one thing, it's "glamour." glamor is in "glamorous"... english is weird.

I love the concept of dreams! And I love poems written about said concept, aswell!

I think my favorite thing about it is that the subject is a continuum. The woman is awake, then she falls asleep and dreams, and when she awakens, the dream is doesn't stop, it is just paused.

Good job!

Really wrote a good poem. i enjoyed reading it from the beginning to the ending. keep up the good poems.

Great work!!!!! amazing use of words!!! and i love how this one painted a picture in my mind..5/5

Wow!! I absolutely love this poem so much!! They way you wrote this poem is beyond perdect!! I can imagine everything you write!! I love it... keep it up!!!

I love the story in this poem, your display of imagery and metaphors made this poem very enjoyable to read. keep writing. 5/5

I really liked this one. the rhyming was amazing and the content.... well it blew me away. 5/5.

~KM~