This was good

This poem is good...Great job.. Keep writing..
Crystal

Its a nice poem like i kinda got confused wit the sedation thing cause...i hav no idea what it means but sides tht i realli liked your poem

Hey thankx for writin a comment.. iv been trying to fix that line .. it was the only thing i could think of that fit
but thankx heaps 4 commenting

Damn thats 100% love it +10% xD