Rlly gd..keep goin..:D

Rlly gd..keep goin..:D

Wow.. emotional. Nice work Keenan.. truly. So much depth and heart. I liked it very much.

-Jennifer. Overall Rating: 4.5/5

Another emotional poem, you have a great talent, keep it up.5/5

Great work!

Wow! Very emotional poem! i loved it lots and NO CRITIQUE!! lol seriously lovely poem!It tells me a very sad story and i loved the way you wrote it out in a simple poem! GREAT WORK!!
Take care
And
Keep Smiling

-*-D*K-*-

This is cute but so sad
i feel the pain
you have so much sadness in your heart...i hope we become friends

tu amor por ti
peace abby

Omgsh is this true?? that was intense, w o w. i lvoed the energy, the rhythem grea jobb..great writer...

lissa

Well done excellent poem thanks for the comment on "The kiss from the dark angel"

Aww; this is so sad. But I like the way you think I (in writing terms)