I really like this poem. the emotion was expressed really well. the picture of this was painted really well for me, i could imagine what this was like. keep up the good work.
Tammie

Omg i love it....i love u babe and u know u can reach me whenever...call me or stalk me or whatever. i love u!!!
~ray

Dude, omg, i LOVE rain! lol...this was an AWESOME poem!! I loved it! I always say: "if you don't want people to see you crying, cry in the rain because nobody knows they're tears..." and you pretty much showed that in your poem! lol GREAT use of words...everything flowed perfectly...5/5!! :)

--*--ScReAm YoUr HeArT OuT--*--

This is a great poem. It had so much imagery. You wanted to know what's now? You're one of my favorite authors. BOO YAH!! HAHA!!

-Vino