Nice poem really liked it :):):)

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Awww.. lol, i liked this! it was very cutee and kinda funny.. the descriptions were good.. the flow could be improved but was okay.. nice job! 4/5

This one made me think of new years when I was young.My father is scottish and the scots love to see in the new year.Growing up my father had huge parties at home to see in th new year and my uncle would get his pipes out and the whole of the party would follow him down the road and neighbours would come out to join the line.Thank you for writing thgis one it certainly brought back happy memories.