Aww! Very expressive and very sweet. Beautiful and simple in every way. Wonderful write. 5/5

Thank you alllllllllllllllllllll.................

Beautifully written Goran.

just a suggestion - did you mean the last line in the poem to read "No matter what the world will say?"

great to know we have a published poet amidst us. Will come back to check out more of yours.

good luck and peace
shobhana

What can i say? you are a good writter, i am speachless.

5/5 keep up the good work

Awwww.. this was really sweet.. the descriptions were beautiful, it flowed well, and the rhymes worked..

That I will go thousand miles.
^ you should add in "a" before "thousand"

No matter what the world say.
^ here it should be "says" but if you want it to rhyme, why don't you add in "will" before "say"

nice job! 5/5

Ok goran this sis great and i admit that your good in short love poems , the only things that capture my attention is the fist stanza the line says
"I can fly like a bird'
um that was ok but then it would be better if you change that in such more captivating line

thats all and the rest was great i love the flow

hope it will help you

thanks

Geneross

Awww its so sweet, i loved it!! your a great writer.. no doubts!!

xoxo Lucy

Aww... this is such a sweet poem. She is a very lucky girl. The flow and rhythm of this is really good and I loved all of it! Keep it up! 5/5

Ah this poem is so cute! it has a pretty good flow and it's just over all very good.

Now that's passion... you have a way with words. Great job 5/5

Wow you write so beautifully

You are one of the best love poets on this site. This was a sweet, simple poem with a lot of heartfelt emotions. Wonderful writting.

I usually say, my fav stanza is... but... i like them all! great job 5/5 you deserve no less.

Its so sweet.i really like it:Dbeautifully written.
--lexie

Your a fabulous writer. You are insparational. I'm not as good as you but i hope to be one day. Thanks for your comment on one of m poems. I love getting comments cause i love when i know that someone is reading m poems and someone appreciates them. Your great, keep on writing...
thanks again
love from shae!

Your styles are different..vry refreshing. keep up the great work. vry good piece.

Lissa

This poem of yours, is beautiful! i love it. it made me smile....for a long time. lol. i look forward to reading more of your poems, your an excellent poet. and im in love with your writing. :D

Love Claire. x o x o

W0w... that is amazing, y0u hav s0 much talent!! an0ther beautiful p0em by a beautiful auth0r ;x
l0ve maddy x0ox

To see your beautiful smile,
I will change my own way.
I will break the chain of values,
No matter what the world say.

hey yaar
thats simply beautiful 5/5

:)

Awwwwwwww......thts really sweet......a 5/5 for me keep it up!!