by Lenny Aug 3, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Strike, strike, succeed, |
by Drew Gold
I love this. Possibly the most mature work of yours to date. Such good transitions and it's sure to resonate with many. Honestly have no critt but praise.. I love how you worked fire as the theme so intimately and the last stanza's my fav. -- alonf with the 7th. Loved the voice of this, so confident. and 'broken chaos' is an amazingly good abstraction. WOW. |