Hey sophie.. thank you for the comment on mine,.. im not that good of a poet tho.. but what i do know is that this poem/message was very well written, it was to the point, and very effective..great use of rhyming words... and very detailed..keep it up..please read some more of my poems, i would love to see what you think.. oh and ive gt u on my favourites, so i can keep cheacking all of your poems :) take care..kirsty palmer xx