Wow such a powerful poem, and very well written, i love how you have used a topic that most people feel so strongly about.. i hate the war and think it should be stopped! please read and comment on mine.. thank you ..kirsty palmer xx

Absolutely agree. You expressed yourself well with clarity and force without getting into a rant or sentimental.
If only the powers that be would read your poem.

If only it could be that easy, the world would be a better place. great job.
Driver

Wow... i absolutley and totally agree.. whats going on is RIDICULOUS and this poem describes everything really nicely i enjoyed reading it .. keep up the good work dude!

I think this poem would have more impact with proper punctuation.

Example:

Stop all this nonsense!
What is this fighting worth?
One day I hope I get my wish,
For simple peace on Earth.

A few simple changes to commas can make the world of difference.

A nice succinct poem that I appreciated.

Bret

That was really good. Im glad ur totally for PEACE. I hope one day it does happen.