Beautiful tragedy..

by .x.HauNt.x.Me.x.   Aug 3, 2006


Two scarred bodies lying together
such a beautiful tragedy
two distorted minds forming one
like it was meant to be

so many broken thoughts
running through these minds
together they forget about
the dark and lonely times

so much for them to mourn for
they share a twin disease
venom running through their veins
but together, put at ease

two twisted damaged souls
find a place to forget
reducing and easing the pain
living with regrets

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  • 18 years ago

    by -Ѕнэ đιεđ ѕсѓεάміηĝ-

    Hey well done, but really sad,. Good use of language. excellent flow and rhyming, keep it up, Love
    ~She died Screaming

  • 18 years ago

    by xxbabigrrlxx

    Wow! such a depressing poem....just ABSOLUTELY beautiful...kepp up the good work!!:):) 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    Aww.. i just loved it.. its sooo sad and it just broke my heart.. i cant even pinpoint a fav stanza coz evry stanza is more beautiful than the one before it... very powerful, yet so desolate.. short, but u got ur point across...
    beautiful and so heartfelt..
    keep it up
    take care
    NannO

    p.s. thnx a lot or ur comment on my poem.. much appreciated

  • 18 years ago

    by Simply Drowning

    I liked it a lot. the image was great and the way u used the words was amazing

  • 18 years ago

    by *Devils lil Reject*

    Hey i like it : ) good write 5/5

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