by BrokenMisery Aug 3, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Vodka soaked breath, |
Great work..again. u have a great way w/ words. really detailed! wow....no words to express my feelings. 5/5 |
That was so deep and sad! It was an amazing poem and every one of your stanzas took my breath away.Absolutely wonderful! The rhyming worked perfectly too.Well done! |