That was so deep and sad! It was an amazing poem and every one of your stanzas took my breath away.Absolutely wonderful! The rhyming worked perfectly too.Well done!

"Layered face in make-up
Mask of a clown
But the insides are pouring,
And the truth is found."

^^ I loved this stanza!Keep writing!5/5
Best wishes,

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

Great work..again. u have a great way w/ words. really detailed! wow....no words to express my feelings. 5/5