by Danielle Aug 3, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
After all that you put me through, |
by Ice Princess
I think your work is great... not meaning to sound patronising or anything... but u do write extremely well for someone so young... the poem felt very real ... I liked it... |
Wow.. such a well writen heartfelt poem, it flowed well, and was really emotional, loved the ending, i think that you should go back and edit it.. as where you used ( ' ) the apostraphy it comes up canA//A!t or someting like that.. other than that well done 5/5..keep it up .. please read and comment on my poems, thanks kirsty palmer xx |
The end of this poem really makes me feel more about the poem itself lol i really liked it but there one was verse |