You Came

by Esther   Aug 3, 2006


You came back into my world,
Without a thought,
Without a care,
How do you dare?

I'd got over you,
My feelings for you had all turned to goo,
But you came,
You came,

What should i do??
My feeling for you had turned to poo,
Now i dunno about the goo,
I think it has changed becuase of you,

I'd got over you,
My feelings for you had gone!
Then you came,
You came

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Hey, i didnt love this one, it kinda made me smile, the rhyming was very forced, even you have to agree to that, but it wasnt that bad, really.
    xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Landon Carter

    Could have been better, But i loved your imagination and ideas. So Keep sharing your feelings. 5/4!

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    I liked the repitition but it just feel apart with the not so mature words.
    it seemed like a fun poem though
    4/5
    it was still enjoyable and readble just think before u write.
    ~Emma

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Wow this is great i really like it!
    keep it up!

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