Let Go

by silent eyes   Aug 3, 2006


Why would you do that to yourself?
How could you sink so low?
You're not the only one with problems
You need to just let things go
Everything happens for a reason
What doesn't kill you only makes you stronger
But you're wasting your life pitying yourself
Because you "Can't take it any longer"
Well I've been there too,you're not alone
Everyone gets depressed, some worse than others
But i deeply care about you,more than you could know
Hopefully this makes you feel better
But that is up to you so,
Make this have a happy ending
And I'll help you along the way
We'll battle this together
By your side I will always stay

(I wrote this for a friend who is very depressed. i just wanted to show him i went through it too. this is the first poem i posted on here. hope you like it!!)

** Quick update;;; my friend in this poem turned into my boyfriend and we've been dating a year and a half. He decided to date me because I wrote this =]

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  • 16 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Easier said than done.

    Not easy to believe either...

  • 18 years ago

    by Hind

    Nice poem i like the flow of it, it was well put together...well 5-5...

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    A great start, with this poem here. you have a great talent and it shoes in your this poem, keep it up and hope to read more from you
    great job.5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    What don't kill you only makes you stronger
    don't= doesn't

    Apart from that, great poem, honest yet kind, the ending was great! Good poem, looking forward to more from you