I loved the imagery in this and it flowed well. It is quite different from your usual style so may take a little getting used to. I think it's brevity throws it a little as well - I am used to much longer stuff.
Overall it is very good and I guess change is something that must be accepted over time. Keep going with it.

This is not the best poem you've written, but honestly it was not bad;D
i liked the second stanza the best (although there arn't many stanzas to chose from..lol)I however thought the repetition of "This angel is going to fly.' i thought it just threw off the ending. Over all is a nice dark poem, yet it could be darker. sorry but i'd give this a 4...but hey, 4/5 isn't bad=D..heh, your still on my favourites so i'll be waiting for more great poems=D
xoxoxo

Very nice
and a nice rhyme scheme,original :)
well done,keep it up :)

Nice poem, but i like your other ones betters. however, you did a wonderful job and it is a nice one.

Wow.. this was very good.. it was dark and exciting.. the flow worked well as did the rhymes.. the only thing that i found didnt really work was the repitition of the last line.. i felt this ruined the effect a little.. but maybe that is just me.. wonderful write! 5/5

Ver nicely done. I enjoy your style very much. Your going on my favorites list. 5/5 Loretta

I like this one aswell. Not as much as the other two but it was still great and I gave it a five. I liked your rhyming scheme though. Very creative.

I thought it worked well, I`ve been considering trying some new styles myself. The same rhythm gets boring after a while . I like to judge each one individually, on its own merit. I loved the last two lines , it gave the feeling of freedom.

That sounded almost prophetic in the way i read it. wow!! i loved how u repeated that last line. it really stood out and made this poem seem uplifting. 5/5

Wow this is very powerfully and beautifully written! I like the rhyming scheme it is very different, and the repetition of the last line is so effective. Well done! 5/5
- Polly

Short but sweet(ish). I find angel cliche but this had a somewhat uplifting feel to it. No real complaints for this one!

Ooo. Nice flow, once again. Emotion was really good. It made the reader think what exactly you're thinking, and makes the poem what exactly you meant it to be. Great write. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Remember that I have galant wings,
To spead up far and wide,
And once I cut off all your strings,
This angel is going to fly.
This angel is going to fly.

awesome except on spelling mistake on spread!!! this angel will truly fly

You r really good with imagery and flow keep it up but the rhyming scheme u tried worked for me

Wonderful job on this. i like the rhyming. greatly written. 5/5

~Kristina