*stands and applauds* wow! love it! such meaning and feeling!! 5/5

So much feeling and and meaninful words
great work
i loved it
its so sad
but if a man treats you like this is it worth hurting yourself over it
instead keep wrighting thats the best way to let the ugly feelings and words out

great work

lana

Awww.. that was so sad.. the flow was a little off at times because some lines did not rhyme.. the emotion was loud and clear though.. and we've all been through this before hunny, just keep your head up! nice job! 4/5