I can deffinately relate to this one..I feel exactly like this. I loved it..it was beautifull sad. Great job...I wish I could write a poem with this style...I might try it.
5/5 for sure
Breanna

This was very sad but you did write it so beautifully, I'm glad you take the time to write poems because your work is really good and it's something every1 should get the chance to read. 5/5