I completley love it..its amazing...and thank you for the comment btw...but i love this poem...it reminds me of something i would most likely write...definitly 5/5

I really enjoyed this poem. great writing!!

I really like this. it relates to me a WHOLE lot!!! it was very well described. keep it up!

This is great. i love it. good job.

I like that poem its very expressive

Really goood poem 5/5 i love your style
mexxx

Wow! That's really deep, I really like this poem a lot...It's sad and yet true, and thanks for the advice I'll do that...Thanks you been great help... :)

Hey, Once again a breathe taking poem. I added you to my favorites and I hope thats ok.

You promised that you'd be there
For every last breath
That we would live our lives together
And even share our death

The last two lines on this stanza we're strong and reflect on how you feel. Keep tight hun!!
xx Rox xx