Hey, this is extremely good..i love the verse "They ask where you went wrong
Like you ever had it right
Like you ever had a clue
Like they've gone through this too" .... you are very talented, keep it up and take care..
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Wow what an ending. In the third stanza "Your" should be "you're", I'm being picky. This is really good. Keep it up.

Parts of this I really enjoyed, such as the first stanza. Felt like a song for some reason. I didn't like the ending. It wasn't written badly, it's just a bit cliched.
Decent poem though

I read ur poem 3 times, and i'm like WAW.
you said every word in theright time
ammazing, m gona check more of ur poems to see if u will be one of my favorites :)

I love this. I love the story of it. My favorite stanza was the fourth one. You used the right words for putting what you wanted across. Overall, a great write. Keep it up. =] 5/5