Aww thats so sadd.. this almost brought me to tears :'( im sorry if this is all true.. this is so sad. but u wrote it well. i relaly like it. u have alot of talent. keep on writing if u ever wana talk im here jus email me
take care
luve angie

This was a good poem...it's sad think you could cheer the next 1 up?...anyway hit me back...peace

Wow, this is very emotionally written. The flow and the structure was very well. Great job.

Peace, Joe