The First time

by Delanea   Aug 4, 2006


The first day i saw you i fell in love

I thought God was finally sending me a present from above

we got together and and things were gravey

untill i told you i was having your baby
you really fliped and left so quick

After that i never saw you and your stick

I just wanted you to know that i loved you so

And that my heart will never love again

I hope you die,becuse you made me cry

never will i be hurt agian....

sorry if its mean im just so mad right now i never got hurt before!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    A very nice poem, u have gave out a true message to the ppl to think twice.
    it is really great written and rhyming is perfect. the only change you should do, in the 3rd line you repeated AND twice.
    overall you got 5/5 from me.

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