Even if it is not quite finished in your mind, this would make a good ending. I like this poem...tell me when you are finished, it is good and i would like to read the new ending you have for it.

I loved the last little bit of this poem. I am sure alot of people feel this way at times, but you can't chnage yourself, so you might as well make the best of what you have. I liked this poem more than the last one i read.

Good work

--Steph

I liked this one the best of those that I read as it seemed to have more thought behind it.
I think it has an ending in itself but there may be room for more. I look forward to seeing if you add anything.