The Last Goodbye

by Lil miss Robin Elizabeth   Aug 4, 2006


Tears sprinkle in my eye
As you say your last Goodbye
You say you will always love me
I start to pray
You say my name sweetly as you say,
You will never forget this day

If you love me then please stay
I beg you as I cry
Please don't do this
Then you give me the last sweet kiss.
my heart burst and I scream please don't,
I tell you to promise me you won't.
Then you say I have to go,
and you say your last good-bye
as my tears flow,
Fine leave me.
Go with her I dont need you.
I found Bryan so go away. :)

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  • 18 years ago

    by Joey Matthews

    The rhymes are very nice. (didn't sound forced, which is kinda hard to avoid or at least i do) - sometimes

    keep up 'em coming, your very good!

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    I did like it but not the greatest. The concept was well cliched. Overall it was interesting. I liked how it began. It was strong beginning and the end tied in with it. Nice job.
    ~Faith-less

  • 18 years ago

    by Coral

    This is such a great poem that i have toread the rest of them now

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by NothingGoldCanStay

    Wowsers New Friend.. LOVE IT!! So sad.. =[ *huggles* 5/5

    xx.New.Friends.Are.AWESOME.xx

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