Oh how touching... I liked the lines

"Look into my eyes, just get lost."

There's something so sweet about that..

//T.L.//

Awwwww! that was so sweet! loved it hunny.. the flow was good, the emotion was strong and clear, and the descriptions were beautiful! wonderful work! 5/5

This is really sweet. I like the way you use the stanzas to reflect different feelings and senses.
I don't feel it has as much depth as the previous poem but is still cute.

Aww, this was such a beautiful poem, filled with obvious love toward another person. You captivated this feeling very well, great work!

--Steph