Some Days. .

by GR33N3Y3DB3AUTY   Aug 4, 2006


Some days i feel like crying
some days i feel like dying
some days i feel like
theres nothing worth fighting
some days i tell my self
im not gonna cry
cause i dont have a reason why
the next thing i know , tears running from my eye
some days i tell my self a lie
i say i wont love him til the day i die
but i just cant forget all the memories
some days i remember God has a plan
He has the world in the palm of his hand
those are the days i realize everythings ok
the days like today

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Very nice poem. Emotional and full of powerful words.

  • 18 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Love the poem. its sweet and words are well put together...nice flow..keep it up!
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    I liked the idea of this poem, and it could be very beautiful and inspirational if you cleaned it up and bit, you shouldn't use slang and swear words in your poetry, i find it less attractive to read. But i guess it's your work and Im no one to judge.

    --Steph

  • 18 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    I like the colloquial vocab style. I like what you say in this and can totally identify.
    Nice job. Keep it up.

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