Peresious moment

by the pale queen of the silent night   Aug 4, 2006


In my heart is where you are
It all began with the first smile we shared
a secret you and I knew
not much, but a precious moment of only few
every time our eyes met
a world of unspoken word was set
upon my trouble heart
blinded by your love and torn apart
away from the world I felt
with reality I can not deal

My love for you is pure
as clear and deep as the ocean.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bhavin

    Its a nice poem... i advice you to keep it the way it is... dont try to edit it by writing ahead... this one looks better as it is... keep writing...

  • 18 years ago

    by the pale queen of the silent night

    I am so glad that u can relate to it..but in wat way...it was a poem I wrote very long time ago but never finished it..maybe someday I will..

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    It is a nice poem as I can relate to now,lol.
    great poem again. your poems are so nice and i feel like i understand each word of it.

  • 18 years ago

    by the pale queen of the silent night

    I wrote this poem for a person when we where at the same school..a very silly one...i didn't have anything new so i desided to post my old ones.

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