Wow. I liked it. Insane ramblings maybe, but it was a wonderful poem. I really like your poems. This one wasn't as long as others of yours but the flow and wording was great.

I LIKED IT

Wow....i like your rambling! haha. anyway, great use of detailing....just WOW. loved how it kinda paintde a picture...5/5! keep up the gr8 work!