Wow...that was unbelievable. I can't even begin to imagine what you are going through, but I'm glad that you are finding a way to express yourself. Keep up the good work, that was awesome!

Jessie xD

This is a really good poem and i am sorry to hear about that i hope u happinses and i know how u feel i lost my love of my life in 2000 he was taken away from a drunk driver. but know she didnt leave u alone she will always b there with u no matter what, again i am sorry to hear about what happen....

Sarah

Thats really beatiful, n thats the only thoughts that came to my head.

'bout "innocent" my poem, it wasnt my baby, i've never been pregnat. I just forgot to dedicate it. so many of my family has lost a child. I thought it was time to say how it is. but thanx for the comment non the less.

~Terra

PS. im sorry for your loss, i wish there was more i could do.

Dave, I am so so sorry for your loss,
Though it probably doesn`t feel like it right now, time does have a way of healing.My prayers are with you. The poem is beautiful. thank you for reading my poems I value your opinion.