Four Walls

by Torn   Aug 4, 2006


Torture in these four walls,
Stains of blood coat the floor.
Where the Anna everyone knows,
Was left behind closed doors.

No one to ever see,
The monster she becomes.
Like a famished child from food,
To the knife she will succumb.

No reasoning to the slices,
No matter what she tries to prove.
Of course it will make things worse,
But what has she got to lose.

Desperation overwhelms her,
Suffocates her every sense.
No taste, smell, touch or feel,
No evidence of common sense.

So there she lies alone,
So pathetic and utterly weak.
I quickly turn to desertion,
As one tear rolls down my cheek.

Away From You ...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    This poem has so much of emotions. And the feelings of utter loneliness. Liked the lines. It's good poem to me.

  • 17 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Thats so dark and tiouching as well!
    visited this site after a long time and feel glad to see all my favourites still writing. superb work dear!

    luv

  • 17 years ago

    by FireCracker

    ABSOLUTELY AMAZING...
    I felt so touched... that was so powerful and the way you worded it was outstanding..Gr8 Work!

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl this was really touching and powerful. very well written keep it up xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    Outstanding poem.......It's October now....I really hope you're feeling better......

    Do Not Despair.....There Is More To Life Than Suffering....Strive On.....Please.

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