Awww.. thats so sad.. i wanna give her a great big hug.. i dont know why, but that poem really got to me.. i've got this horrible sinking feeling in the bottom of my stomach.. lol.. really great job! 5/5

AWWWWWWWW...... that is really sad i have to go with Jessy on this i wanna give her a great big hug 2... i like how u wrote this the dections and the way u wrote this i loved it. It sorta kinda sounds like me in a way but i'm not dead yet..lol.. Oh and thanks for the comment!!!! i give u a 100/100 on this poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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sign, Rosie

Wow, that was very powerful. Keep up the writing... it is the best therapy out there :D. You have a lot of talent!

Aww that was so sad, but so beautifully written.. excellent 5/5 xx

Another AWESOME poem... so sad. but i still loved it. THATS IT LADY, YOURE GOING ON MY FAVORITES LIST!!! hahaha...

5/5

-Allanah

Even in poems--sad songs breaks or bend at the end..
Wonderful write..

God Bless!

Wow, a sad one, but you are a very talented writer, i really like your poems.

The first thing I noticed about this poem, is it had a really steady flow and the rhythm was great. The rhymes were also great and help add to the flow. Overall, was well thought out poem.

Whoa that was an awesome read...I'm speechless all i can say is WOW!!!

WOW. This is a really sad poem. it was also a great read. i really loved it. 5/5

Kalee

WOW, that was so so sad.
I never expected it to end like that, but it was a perfect ending to a perfect poem.
You really touched my heart with those sad words.
Keep writing

Much love, Tara-Kay

Oh! this poem is so amazing! i loved it so much. sad but very insighting into how you picture everything. loved it fully.

5/5 always. David