by goddess-glamourpuss Aug 4, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Be gone from Heaven in shame. |
I am overwhelmed by the strong message of this dark poem |
by Absinth Eyes
Wow... that was VERY good! Started out strong, which usually means it falls flat later on, but you kept it up beautifully... 5/5, and an add as a favorite. Keep it up! |
by Darien
This was a pretty good poem. Really dark. A lot of vivd images jumping out at the readers, which is great for those people who get a thrill reading. I just thought the last line wasn't a great finisher, but still a great poem. |
Beautifully written and you make your point well. I love it. |
I'm speechless. It all flows together perfectly. It's such a dark poem that it gives me chills. That's talent. I loved it 5/5 |