Comments : Pari - A Fairy (For my friend, philosopher, guide)

  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    I truly loved your poem. I thank you for sharing it. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    It is so nice and sweet, great job

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Wow! that was great, Bhavin. very nicely done - especially the way you portrayed her good side and not so good. That's what makes each of us - a combination of both ying and yang.

    very well done.

    love and luck
    Badi D

  • Great poem..its very touching..and i believe ur friend would apprciate it very much..i can relate to this poem..its very beautifuly written...keep the good job up..

  • 18 years ago

    by Sondos

    I really loved this, it was both touching and eloquent and that is something hard to master!

    I really really enjoyed this and your friend is lucky to have!

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    This write is beautiful, touching and very heartfelt. I love how you have showed the good and not so good side of her, for this is what makes a person what they are! Wonderful write!

    Also, thanks for the lovely comment you left on my Haiku. It's greatly appreciated.

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela