I truly loved your poem. I thank you for sharing it. :) |
by Goran Rahim
It is so nice and sweet, great job |
by shobhana kumar
Wow! that was great, Bhavin. very nicely done - especially the way you portrayed her good side and not so good. That's what makes each of us - a combination of both ying and yang. |
Great poem..its very touching..and i believe ur friend would apprciate it very much..i can relate to this poem..its very beautifuly written...keep the good job up.. |
by Sondos
I really loved this, it was both touching and eloquent and that is something hard to master! |
by Angie
This write is beautiful, touching and very heartfelt. I love how you have showed the good and not so good side of her, for this is what makes a person what they are! Wonderful write! |