by Claire Aug 4, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Crying a river, crying a lake, staying alive for only your sake. |
by LadyPearl
Good start, the first line was amazing. Afterwards, the flow got off. You can also add more imagery. Try to make the poem longer. |
by Deathcanwait
Hey, rather good! the first line is imense! the rest is also good, but yeh, the first is awesome. it flows really well! awesome! |