True Love

by Claire   Aug 4, 2006


Crying a river, crying a lake, staying alive for only your sake.
Won’t let you leave me without a fight, I will die that night.
A few small words we’ll talk; I’ll see that light and begin to walk.
Never will you understand the way I feel for you, I don’t even understand, I only know its true.

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  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Good start, the first line was amazing. Afterwards, the flow got off. You can also add more imagery. Try to make the poem longer.

  • 18 years ago

    by Deathcanwait

    Hey, rather good! the first line is imense! the rest is also good, but yeh, the first is awesome. it flows really well! awesome!

    Keep Hope

    Matt