by Deathcanwait Aug 4, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Like a shiny, silver needle |
Wow this is so beautiful great poem 10/10 |
by Cindy
What a tender beautiful poem. Imagery is excellent. Your love shines in this piece. |
by Midnight Sun
I really like the verse, "Like a delicate, warming flame that I never want to smother. You haven't lost your beauty from lighting up another." Great job!!! 5/5! And thanx for your comments! |
by Jerbear
Great! I almost started crying! I've never done drugs (which I'm guessing is part of this poem, but I can still see a great mental image! try checking out some of my stuff! |