Wow. Each stanza was like a stand alone poem that flowed together brilliantly. The short sharp lines gave athe whole thing a really sad feel and added to the brutality of the final two stanzas.
5/5

Awesome poem; very true, sad, and powerful. Keep up the good work :)

Loved how you took one word and described it with perfect rhymes. Each one got darker as the poem went on. Don't know what else to say. One of my more favorite ones though (Watch out for those down voters)

Wow, i really liked this poem. it flows so smoothly. youre a good writer. great job.
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Oh my, wow...This was so beautiful. I am stunned and frankly at a loss of words. Your poetry is always amazingly expressive and well written. No wonder you're on my favorites. Keep up the great work! 5/5 xxx

Wow, this was a really good poem. It actually seemed like 6 different short poems in one. Each verse being a poem with it's own title. Really cool and very creative. Well done!

I liked the short stanzas. They were short, yes, but filled with deep emotion. The rhymes were amazing! I really liked this one. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha