This poem is so perfectly stuctured i couldnt say one thing about it loved it and from reading the poem this is how you strongly feel i felt it an its unusual for me to feel someone elses poem wow well done you should be really proud of your poems :):):) keep up the good work an ill keep readin :):)
Please would you comment on some of my poems i like as much feedback as poss thnx XxX AlEx XxX

I gave you a 5/5 it was really good and i enjoyed reading it keep up the good writing

Great choice of words in this poem!! So glad you have a friendship like this..Its nice to just have that one friend who makes you feel this way! Wondeful poem! 5/5

This poem kind of confused me, i think you might have typed it in a hurry and mixed up some words, i did see a few typos. I liked some of the rhymes you used in this poem, but a few seemed forced. You had a good idea but i think it could have been written better.

--Steph

This is such a great poem.. the rhymings awesome.. you can tell you struggled with a few of them though... but still its an amazing poem.. it really expresses the way you feel .. keep it up! =]P

Wow how wonderful!
I love this poem so much, and all ur poems r so gr8!
keep it up
nemO xxxxxxxx

This is a great poem. it's wonderful. well done i enjoyed reading it. your really a great writer.

Erm, it's beautifully written..

Simple but really efeective nice job :D

xxx alex xxx