This was wonderful Bill. It is so heartfelt,a love poem. I hope this is real and you have found that soul. Thats what we all search for our entire lives. Awesome my friend 5/5 Loretta

Aww.. This is very touching. 'Around the corner' seems so far away when contentedness is there where you are. This is beautifully written. Well done. xx

This was good

Wow very good.

Very nice. Your rhyming scheme is very nice. Many poems, in my opinion, have rhyming schemes that take away from the poem's meaning. Your's fit very well. Good job!

Very nice and beautiful