Goal

by Tormented   Aug 4, 2006


I asked you to help
You smiled and turned around
Sad, I went away
But you took my hand,
Promised to never let it go
Happily I took it,
Together we walked
In trouble, in happiness
In depression, in sadness
All the way you held it,
When I was near my goal
You let my hand go
Told me I could handle it now
But as soon as you let me go
Everything went wrong
I looked back but couldn't see you
Left alone, to go
I reached my goal
But without you...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Corruption

    This is awesome and i think im gonna go around telling everyone to read ur awesome peoms and thx for the comment on my poems good job:D

    keenan

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    A sad one, but a great one once again

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    I really like this, I'm not sure what it is about it, but I really like it. It was definitely unique and you worded it very well. The flow and rhythm was really good and it held up well. Great job! 5/5 Keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    This is a good written poem! but very sad! the poem has strong feelings inside. donno what to say i am speechless!

    5/5 keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    This was so sad. I loved it though. It was very well written I enjoyed reading it.

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