Aww this is great sad poem torm it is hard when your on that situation

Btw nice piece um for me just edit the
"Told me I could handle it from here"
but dont change the meaning just make it rhyme like the other to make it better ..
but still great 5/5

thanks
Geneross

Awww...dat so sad...i hate de endin...well i mean i hate de way it turned out...u wrote it well...i luved it...

A very good poem, well written, not the best but still a good try. keep writing
xxxxxx

I like this poem, its inspiring. obtaining a goal on your own is always satisfying. great job.
Driver

This was so sad. I loved it though. It was very well written I enjoyed reading it.

This is a good written poem! but very sad! the poem has strong feelings inside. donno what to say i am speechless!

5/5 keep it up!

I really like this, I'm not sure what it is about it, but I really like it. It was definitely unique and you worded it very well. The flow and rhythm was really good and it held up well. Great job! 5/5 Keep it up!

A sad one, but a great one once again

This is awesome and i think im gonna go around telling everyone to read ur awesome peoms and thx for the comment on my poems good job:D

keenan