I like this poem it sounded like it
was written for a particular person
which makes it great!
5/5 i love it'
please comment my poems
i dotn think any of them where out of boredom though
i give this a 5/5

I like dis poem alot..
its nice

Well i loved it

this is really good some poems have this thing about them that no one should say how to improve because it will spoil their work.

this is one of them poems its YOUR work and only YOU should suggest things to fix it otherwise it wont be your poem if you know what im sayin

lovely poem though :):) keep it up xx

would you comment on some of my poems please i like as much feedback as i can get :):) thnx xxx alex xxx