Never again

by Danielle   Aug 5, 2006


Say goodbye to tears,
not another heart ache.
your not really mine,
never were going to be.

no more pain inside,
dont want to be the other.
cant say the words,
to let you know.

how i feel about you,
you need to let me know.
dont let me go,
i may never come back.

i don't want the pain,
i just want you to know.
your every thing,
everything to me.

never again,
will i let you go....

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  • 18 years ago

    by Krissey

    Good beginning stanza!! Its great that you start off with a strong stanza because readers get turned off if the beginning isn't what they want to read, but you started off good....in the middle there could be a little work done, but a poem is a poem and you write how you write....soo good job! I still give you props!
    -Krissey

    P.S would appreciate if you read "The sound of Hammers"