by Danielle Aug 5, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Say goodbye to tears, |
by Krissey
Good beginning stanza!! Its great that you start off with a strong stanza because readers get turned off if the beginning isn't what they want to read, but you started off good....in the middle there could be a little work done, but a poem is a poem and you write how you write....soo good job! I still give you props! |