If only if only...

by sarah   Aug 5, 2006


If only if only
i would not cry
if only if only
the love did not die

if only if only
the sun didn't go down
if only if only
i would smile not frown

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  • 18 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Awww! Very sad peace of writeing! But i like it. I like the rhymes you used. Not a big fan of the if only if only. Thought the repitition was a bit too much. But still its a great read! Keep it up! xx

  • 18 years ago

    by BlessedByAnAngel

    Short and sad, great job, 5/5

    ~[AnotherDream]~

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