Comments : If only if only...

  • 18 years ago

    by BlessedByAnAngel

    Short and sad, great job, 5/5

    ~[AnotherDream]~

  • 18 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Awww! Very sad peace of writeing! But i like it. I like the rhymes you used. Not a big fan of the if only if only. Thought the repitition was a bit too much. But still its a great read! Keep it up! xx