by Mommy And Me Aug 5, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
With each bite the sweet aura seeps into my mouth |
by Tara Kay
I think what i like about your poems, is that they are different, they are set up nicely and have a nice style. this one was good, but i couldnt get into it that easily. i liked it though. keep trying, you have talent there. |