by Wasted Fake Smiles Aug 5, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
You say I'm always fighting you, but I'm on your side, |
by BrokenMisery
Normally I hate these kids of poems because usally theres a lot of forced rhymes. This was really good in that way because it just flowed. I think you can write better with better language but its a good job, keep it up! |